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-Come, dear lord, in the lotus of my heart.
+Lord, please come into my heart-lotus.
-You promised to return
+You left, saying You'd return;
-but for nights on end
+But too many a night has passed.
-You linger far.
-Garlands have been laid aside.
+Now, no one is wearing flower garlands;
-I neglect to tie them in my hair
+I too don't fasten one to my chignon.
-and to my weary eyes
+In my dry eyes, the world has lost its beauty;
-the beauty of the world grows dim.
+You've taken that grace away, oh Heart Thief.
-You have stolen the beauty.
+In my mind, not a single song is sung;
-O mind stealer,
+Within mind's ambit, no tune is struck.
-I am devoid of your song.
+Beyond earshot they've all been removed;
+Marooned am I in cloud-covered gloom.
-Around my desert heart
-not a single note
-not a harmony/melody
-is struck.
-All have passed beyond the range of my ear
-and i am stranded
-in a deep dark spell.
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