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 On a moonlit night with the moon along,
 For whose sake had You come?
-In a recess of the mind, upon winds sonorous,
+In a recess of the mind with the wind sonorous,
-Stealthily You came, singing a song.
+Stealthily You went on singing a song.
 In the depths of my thought I had been lonely;