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 On the chariot of mind to thrill my psyche?
 Oh, Who are You that gave a jolt
-To my consciousness today in the morning.
+To my consciousness this very morning.
-Traversing the path of effulgence
+Along the path of light You've come,
-Thou has captured sweet charm,
+Absorbing all our common kindness.
-then appear
+Your own utter kindness You've conferred;
-to fill the lives of all.
+You've come to fill the lives of all.
-In melodies thou pulsates,
+In melodies You pulsate, stealing rhythms
-stealing rhythms
+And pouring forth Your own rhythm.
-and pouring forth thy own rhythm.
+You have come to all
+To sing Your song.
-Thou hast come
-to all
-to sing thy song.
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