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 To my consciousness this very morning.
-Along the path of effulgence You've come,
+Along the path of effulgence You have come,
 Absorbing all our common kindness.
 Your own perfect kindness You've conferred;
-You've come to fill the lives of all.
+You have come to fill the lives of all.
-Along the path of melody You've come,
+Along the path of melody You have come,
 Absorbing all our common cadence.
 Your own perfect cadence You've conferred;
-You've come to sing a song to all.
+You have come to sing a song to all.
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