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-Who are you all alone, by the wayside standing,
+Who are you all alone, standing by the wayside,
-Your eyes full of tears, eyes full of tears?
+Your eyes so tearful, eyes so tearful?
-Who are you all alone, gazing toward the heavens,
+Who are you all alone, gazing toward the sky,
-Your arms raised skyward, arms raised skyward?
+Your arms raised upward, arms raised upward?
 What you've wanted, you don't get;