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-Who are you standing alone beside the road,
+Who are you standing alone at the wayside,
-With eyes full of tears, with eyes full of tears?
+Eyes full of tears, eyes full of tears?
-Who are you, gazing at the blue sky,
+Who are you, gazing alone at the blue yonder,
-With arms outstretched, with arms outstretched?
+Arms lifted upward, arms lifted upward?
-You did not get what you wanted.
-You did not want what you got.
+What you wanted, you did not get.
-The hunger of your body, life, and mind
+What you got, you did not want.
-Are not fulfilled as yet.
+The longings of your mind are not satiated.
-The love of your heart has all dried up.
+The love filling your heart has evaporated.
-You loved those you wanted to love
-But in return, you received only hate.
+Those you wanted, you loved.
+From them in return, you received hate.
 You have lost everything, and what have you gained?
-Your only wealth now is your throat filled with songs.
+Your only accumulation is the song filling your throat.
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