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-Say something, tell me something;
+Say something, tell something;
-Please don't go so soon.
+Please don't go so quickly.
-To the great blue void of Your cosmos,
+In this universe, Your great azure,
-Don't cast me aside.
+Don't abandon me.
-Let me be intimate with Thee,
+Let me be close with Thee,
 In many ways, in many streams.
 The nectar of my budding mind,
-Don't let it dry up.
+Don't let it run dry.
-Only You have I loved,
+I have loved You only,
-With grief and joy, night and day.
+With joy and grief, persistently.
-In mud, I've kept my lotus abloom;
+In mud, I've kept my lotus blooming;
-Please don't strip its petals.
+Don't rip off its leaves.
 </poem>
 |}