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-Who has appeared, piercing the darkness,
+From what far shore of darkness have You risen,
-The polestar of my life?
+Polestar of my existence?
-From what heavenly realm have You brought
+From what celestial kingdom have You brought
-A stream of divine nectar to this earth?
+This earth's flow of ambrosia?
-Come, Lord, in life's essence,
+Come, Lord, in my life's aroma;
-Come, Lord, in mind's flame,
+Come, Lord, in my psychic lamp;
-Come, Lord, in heart's ''kadamba''—{{#tag:ref|The [[wikipedia:Neolamarckia cadamba|kadam]], also known as kadamba, is a genus of evergreen trees, native to the Indian subcontinent, Southern China, and Southeast Asia. Its sweetly fragrant flower is used in the production of Indian sandalwood perfume.|group="nb"}}
+Come, Lord, in my heart's [[wikipedia:Neolamarckia cadamba|kadamba]]...
-Make this world sweetly fragrant.
+You make this world fragrant.
-Come, Lord, in  life's melody,
+Come, Lord, in the notes of my life;
-Come, Lord, in mind's lyrics,
+Come, Lord, in the songs of my mind
-Come, Lord, in heart's rhythm—
+Come, Lord, in the beat of my heart,
-Stir those who are aslumber.
+You bestir those who are dormant.
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