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-My mind goes on floating through the moist wind,
+Mind goes on floating in the humid breeze,
-absorbed by the fragrance of the campaka (magnolia) flower.
+Smeared with the fragrance of magnolia.
-That unknown companion
+The unknown lover, He is all the sweetness of life.
-has poured all the sweetness of his heart into it
+Profusely, I call unto Him.
-and keeps on calling me.
 Why does he remain in faroff places?
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 Why does not he look towards me?
 Why does he continue dancing from afar?
+Despite keeping Himself hidden,
-Despite he keeping himself hidden,
 I reach him by his own song and rhythm.
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 He stays close to me in pain and happiness.
 His sweet smile secretly remains with me always.
 Though unacquainted, he is not unknown,
-His divine game (liila'),
+His divine game (liila'), I have now well understood.
-I have now well understood.
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