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-My Lord, You are the pristine light.
+Oh my Lord, Light of the New,
-From what great distance have You come?
+At a great distance You had been.
-Now the rhythms of the universe
+Now the rhythm of the earth
-Dance round and round You.
+Is dancing all around You.
-I remember my gloomy nights,
+On that, my night of utter darkness,
-Clouded with deep solitude.
+Concealed were You somewhere in secret;
-Spreading ever-new wings
+Spreading wings ever-new,
-You came flying, piercing the darkness.
+You flew in, piercing the gloom.
-All dejection has lifted.
+All despair has been removed;
-Today, every hope has blossomed.
+Today every hope has bloomed.
-All-pervasive love
+Love all-pervasive and ubiquitous
-Now floods the whole cosmos.
+Is floating now, appeasing the cosmos.
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