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-Oh, Traveler, leading me,
+Oh, Traveler in the lead,
-Just once look back
+Just once, please look back at me.
-Look back just once, look back.
+Look back just once, look back at me.
-Without ever being introduced,
+Without our ever being introduced,
 Still I call You tearfully.
-My stream has got lost
+My stream has gotten lost
-Amid desert sands.
+Amid the desert sands.
 Heart breaking in anguish,
 Mind races in search of Him.
 That anguish is the gist of my life;
-It rises in my mind, time and again.
+It rises in the mind, time after time.
-The blossoms of my mind
+Mind's bloom has gotten lost
-lie torn
+Amid the forest thorns.
-entangled in thorns,
+Eyes painted black with but illusion,
-and i search for eyes in the dark night
+I languish in my quest at dark of dusk.
-to mark with delusion's line.
+The pain of defeat is thorns' torture;
-Can you forget,
+Can mind ever be relieved?
-O mind,
-the thorns' piercing pain
-and the agonies of loss.
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