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-You did not come in my early life;
+In my early life, You did not appear;
-In my mind is no anguish over that.
+I feel no anguish over that.
 I did not seek... with this remorse,
 My distressed mind weeps constantly.
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 You were so close, and yet I did not call;
 My days and nights have passed in vain.
-At this late stage in life, that very story
+At this late stage, that same history–
-The more it comes to mind, the more pain I get.
+The more I recollect, the more I feel the pain.
 All who have come stay for a fixed duration
 To do some work upon this earth.
-When our time's spent idly, the chance wasted;
+But time passes idly, the chance gets wasted;
-Then blaming God is of no avail.
+And blaming God is ineffectual.
 </poem>
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