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 Tomár tare mor jata sádhaná
 Tomár rúpe ráge kari náná
-Rauṋer ei dharańi{{#tag:ref|In all of the published versions, the word ''dhará'' is given. However, in the audio file ''dharańi'' is heard. As the meaning is the same (and both rhythmically and poetically the audio version is appealing), ''dharańi'' is preferred here.|group="nb"}} ramańiiya
+Rauṋer ei dharańi{{#tag:ref|In all of the published versions, the word ''dhará'' is given. However, in the audio file ''dharańi'' is heard. The meaning is the same. Here we have published ''dharańi'' (per the audio file); however, ''dhará'' would be at least equally acceptable.|group="nb"}} ramańiiya
 Tomár bhálabásáy bhará dhará