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 Bestowing fulfillment, You've smiled.
-Dismissing distinction twixt own and other,
+Dismissing distinction twixt ones near and far,
 The bounds of limitation You've swept aside.
-Quenching throats that were athirst,
+Quenching throats that were sorely parched,
 You've dispensed the nectar of life.
-In the midst of deep, silent darkness
+Amid a hushed and static darkness
-You came
+The Formless is graced with radiant vibration,
-in the sway of effulgence
+With Your very own hand upon our eyelids,
-and exquisite beauty
+You've painted the salve of blissful ideation.
-and, with your own hands,
-smeared my eyes
-with the collyrium of bhava (blissful sweet ideation).
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