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 Dumbfounded, I can only gaze at Him;
 At Him alone I gaze.
-Unbearable is the pain when heart holds Him not,
+Unbearable is the pain when my heart holds Him not,
-But I cannot hold Him in my heart.
+But I can't hold Him in the heart.
-I feel no fear, feel no shame; only love I feel,
+I feel no fear, feel no shame; only love I feel...
-For He has loved me.
+Lo, it is He Who has loved me.
-Even unaware of His measured rhythm, my heart does frolic;
+Even blind to His measured rhythm, my heart does frolic;
 My heart does frolic.
-Even unaware of His melodic refrain, my [[:wikipedia:Ektara|monochord]] plays;
+Even blind to His melodic refrain, my [[:wikipedia:Ektara|monochord]] plays;
 My monochord plays.