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-The golden dawn of my life,
+The golden dawn in my life,
-Is it appearing another time?
+Is it returning another time?
-Countless pains, countless laments,
+Countless pains, countless torments,
 Countless shames— the gloom is rent.
 So many eves, so many morns,
-So many fall and spring nights,
+So many nights, both spring and autumn,
-So many hopes and expectations—
+So much hope and expectation–
-Swept away on a stream of tears.
+Upon tears they've floated off.
-The morning sun lights up the eastern sky.
+Morning's sun beams on the eastern heavens,
-The air is suffused with flower fragrance.
+The wind rises on fragrance of flowers;
-In the new joy of the new year,
+With the new year, with a new happiness,
-All memories of affliction dissipate.
+Memories of affliction, they all vanish.
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