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Verse 4 and some refinements - translation continues

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 You came, Thou most revered.
-With honey-coating smiles
+With Your honey-coating smiles,
 You perfumed the way, Thou without peer.
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 By your joy,
 my garden dances in frenzy.
 O most memorable one,
 You went away on a raindrenched night.
-O dearest one,
+With Your warm and tender eyes,
-Your affectionate and sweet eyes,
+You crushed my heart, Thou most beloved
-stirred the core of my heart.
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