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-Filling the octave with sweetness,
+Packing the octave with sweetness,
-We march on, singing songs.
+I sing of my forward march.
-Coating the temple of our minds with affection,
+Coating the mind's temple with affection,
-We question whether anyone is not our kin.
+I say there's nobody unrelated!
-All the ecstasy of the divine world
+The whole set of heaven's thrills,
-Is dancing in the human world today.
+They dance today upon the earth.
-The combined ambrosia of the seven realms{{#tag:ref|In tantric cosmology, the cosmic mind is held in seven ''lokas'', seven strata or worlds. See [[Ananda_Sutram#Chapter_3:_Mind_and_Sadhana|Ananda Sutram 3-2]]. |group="nb"}}
+The combined nectar of the seven worlds,{{#tag:ref|In tantric cosmology, the cosmic mind is held in seven ''lokas'', seven strata or worlds. See [[Ananda Sutram#Chapter 3: Mind and Sadhana|Ananda Sutram 3-2]].|group="nb"}}
-Has blended into one, cousins.
+It's blended into one, my cousin.
-Diffusing the sweet fragrance of magnolia,
+Casting sweet magnolia fragrance,
-We offer salutations to all.
+I pay my respects to all.
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