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 In this world of divine sport.
-Oh my constant Friend, I know You are close,
+Abiding friend, I know You are close,
-Commanding my pleasures and pains.
+Carrying the weight of my pleasure and pain.
 When thinking of You,
-I float in Your current,
+I float on Your current,
-In Your smile on the dawn of a new year.
+In Your smile on this dawn of a new year.
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