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== Original translation and reason for change == | |||
After receiving some complaints about possible unwanted implications of the first line in the translation, the translation was revised. The original translation posted here contained the descriptor "free-range", which was intended to express a degree of liberation and unleashed potential that might be lost with the current wording. Before revision, the translation posted on Sarkarverse read: | |||
<poem> | |||
We are free-range girls. | |||
In mountains and hills, beside rapids, | |||
Beside rills, in song and dance we whirl. | |||
</poem> | |||
--[[User:Abhidevananda|Abhidevananda]] ([[User talk:Abhidevananda|talk]]) 07:28, 10 March 2016 (UTC) | |||
== Free-range girls == | |||
The daughters of Paramapurusa are not confined to the house as servants or wives. --[[User:Abhidevananda|Abhidevananda]] ([[User talk:Abhidevananda|talk]]) 07:32, 6 September 2016 (UTC) | |||