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 Your sea of forms has come within my grasp,
-And You permeate the sky of my mind.{{#tag:ref|According to [http://dsalsrv02.uchicago.edu/cgi-bin/romadict.pl?query=%E0%A6%9A%E0%A6%BF%E0%A6%A6%E0%A6%BE%E0%A6%95%E0%A6%BE%E0%A6%B6&searchhws=yes&table=biswas-bengali Samsad] ''cidákásha'' (চিদাকাশ) has multiple meanings, all of them pertinent here. In its loose but popular sense, the word simply means the canvas or firmament of mind. However, this line effectively establishes the broader meaning of ''cidákásha'' as the Supreme Entity, conceived as a placid and indifferent sky as well as the mind itself.|group="nb"}}
+And You fill the sky of my mind.{{#tag:ref|According to [http://dsalsrv02.uchicago.edu/cgi-bin/romadict.pl?query=%E0%A6%9A%E0%A6%BF%E0%A6%A6%E0%A6%BE%E0%A6%95%E0%A6%BE%E0%A6%B6&searchhws=yes&table=biswas-bengali Samsad] ''cidákásha'' (চিদাকাশ) has multiple meanings, all of them pertinent here. In its loose but popular sense, the word simply means the canvas or firmament of mind. However, this line effectively establishes the broader meaning of ''cidákásha'' as the Supreme Entity, conceived as a placid and indifferent sky as well as the mind itself.|group="nb"}}
-So, unwittingly, You've come within my grasp;
+So, unawares, You've given me a hold;
-You cannot delude and elude me any more.
+You won't elude me any more.
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