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 I'm in love with You alone—
 You're the essence of all I've known.
-I commit my life to Thee;
+I committed my life to Thee;
-Pledged am I to do Thy deeds.
+Pledged I've been to do Thy deeds.
-From the very dawn of consciousness,
+From the dawn of consciousness,
-I've been floating in Your current.
+I have ridden Your current.
-Lord, I am a flower of the stream;
+Lord, I'm a flower of the stream;
-On Your ripples I go on dancing.
+On Your ripples I've been dancing.
-By your love,
+At the evening twilight of my days,
-in this new melody of my life's dusk,
+In Your devotion let me dissipate.
-I become submerged into a fragrance of sweetness.
+Smeared by the sweetness of Your pollen,
-I now recognise that formless gem.
+I've come to know the Unbodied Gem.
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