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 Many times I have come; I have danced and sung...
-Often I have loved, and often have I torn illusion.
+Often I have loved, and often I have torn illusion.
-Many games I have played, and I have gone toward Thee;
+Many games I have played, and I have gone to Thee;
 But customarily my world, with dust it keeps mingling.
 Yet, absent You, this dusty earth does not exist;
-To Your rhythm, it ever drifs with heaven.
+To Your rhythm, ever it drifts with heaven.
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