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 With many names, so many times.
-With the colored splendor of morning's sun,
+By the colored splendor of morning's sun,
-With my lifeblood I've achieved Thee.
+With my lifeblood I've attained Thee.
 I've seen You in heart's privacy,
-Sweeping away the sorrow and affliction.
+Sweeping away obstacles, the burden of affliction.
 When I was drunk on blind attachment's wine,
 Though gaining You close by, I did not see.
-Forgetting You, I chased unreal things,
+Forgetting You, I've been crazed by unreal things,
-But You have shattered those illusions mine.
+But You have broken those illusions mine.
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