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-O lord, i continue waiting for your arrival,
+Longing for You, I go on waiting;
-my mind is eagerly waiting to hear your footsteps.
+Your footfall thrills my mind.
+Your sweet smile, Your sweet smell,
-Your sweet smile and fragrance
+Rouse hope in a dejected heart.
-awakens hope in disheartened people.
-To your feet dust,
-human beings of this world bow down.
+To your feet dust, human beings of this world bow down.
 Your form and colour,
 Your radiations of light and fragrance,
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 The inert mind does not understand this.
 To your tunes, rhythm, melody and attraction
-all are dancing.
+All are dancing.
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