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 Yourself I hold dear;
 This, though known, do You know it not?
-Hoping for Your arrival I stay waiting;
+In hope of Your advent I stay waiting;
-In an idle moment, thinking, do You see it not?
+Musing at an idle moment, do You see it not?
-Only for You is my life;
+Just for You is my life;
-With Your tune alone, the world of mine.
+With Your tune alone, world of mine.
-On the far horizon, on thought's boundary,
+On the far horizon at thought's frontier,
-Only getting Thee is my [[sadhana]].
+Only getting You is my [[sadhana]].
-What I crave, and what I don't request,
+What I crave and what I don't request,
-In Your presence, it is not suppressed.
+In Your presence it is not suppressed.
 All my yearning having painted red,
-With Your hue, psyche You fill it not.
+With Your hue the psyche You fill not.
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