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 | <poem>
 You know how to play the game of chiaroscuro;
-In whimsy, how to pull the strings of all You know.
+Per Your whim, how to pull the strings of all You know.
 You can bring down light in darkest night;
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 And You know how to make heart's harpstrings resound.
-With your grace
+With Your grace, the world is made colorful;
-the world is colourful;
+In Your liila, we are all subordinate to maya.
-Your inscrutable game
+Casting off the web of illusion, You bring liberation;
-engages all
+Please bring liberation, Lord, bring liberation.
-in maya's hypnotic spell.
-And you alone, lord, know well how
-to tear asunder illusion's veil
-and grant emancipation.
 </poem>
 |}