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You had come with [[:wikipedia:Saraca asoca|ashoka]] and [[:wikipedia:Mimusops elengi|bakul]],
You had come with [[:wikipedia:Saraca asoca|ashoka]] and [[:wikipedia:Mimusops elengi|bakul]],
Life's every border, honey-coated by blooms and fruits.
Life's every border honey-coated by their blooms and fruits.
Fresh and new, they had awakened 'longside Your feet
Fresh and new, they had wakened alongside Your feet
With a sweetness unique and music in many beats.
With a sweetness unique and music in many beats.


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Essence of that love-nectar still sways, shining brightly.
Essence of that love-nectar still sways, shining brightly.


You have gone away, but still the love sails on today...
You have gone away, but the love sails on even today...
With each cadence from heartcore, it's original, nonpareil.
In each cadence is heartcore's impulse beyond compare.
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