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 Why does it act like that?
 Again and again, when time stands still,
-My soul longs for the unknown.
+My soul longs for the unrevealed.
 Where are You; are You in hiding?
-Seeking within the seven worlds,{{#tag:ref|This is a reference to the seven layers of the cosmic mind: ''bhú'' (physical world), ''bhuvah'' (crude mental world), ''svah'' (subtle mental world), ''mahah'' (supramental world), ''janah'' (subliminal world), ''tapah'' (causal mental world) and ''satya'' (ultimate causal world). |group="nb"}},
+Searching all over the seven worlds,{{#tag:ref|This is a reference to the seven layers of the cosmic mind: ''bhú'' (physical world), ''bhuvah'' (crude mental world), ''svah'' (subtle mental world), ''mahah'' (supramental world), ''janah'' (subliminal world), ''tapah'' (causal world) and ''satya'' (pure consciousness). |group="nb"}},
-Greatly afflicted, tears flowing,
+Deeply afflicted, tears flowing,
-My mind yearns to realize Thee.
+My mind aspires to realize Thee.
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