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-On pitch-dark nights, stoic is my mind;
+With stoic mind on pitch-dark nights,
-Why does that happen to be?
+Why does it happen to be…
-Again and again, when time stands still,
+Oft and again, when time stands still,
-My soul yearns for the unrevealed.
+My soul longs for the unrevealed.
 Where are You; where do You stay hidden?