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 Verdure's beauty is well-nigh destroyed.
 On the burning soil and withered grass,
-You rapidly imprinted the season's identity.
+You rapidly imprinted your season's identity.
-The river flow has dwindled.
+The river's water flow has dwindled.
-Stars float in a cloudless night.
+Cloudless nights are flooded with stars.
-He, whose divine sport is the cause of all,
+The one at whose pleasure everything exists—
-Has come with a special form in summer.
+You have brought Him in marvelous form.
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