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 Forgotten is pain's visit.
-Your luster floats on the mirror of psyche,
+Your brightness floats on the mirror of psyche,
-At times by a hint, elsewise crystal clear.
+Sometimes by hint, else crystal clear.
 Whenever it goes missing to a realm unknown afar,
 Then circling existence arrives a mist.