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-In the new day, in the crimson radiance,
+In the crimson splendor of the new dawn,
 With the rhythm of forms You entered my mind.
-You know how to make us laugh.
-You know how to make us weep.
+You know how to make us laugh; You know how to make us cry;
 You know how to play hide-and-seek.
-Today You came to fill my life
+Today You came with brilliant light to fill my life.
-With Your rays of radiant light.
-You know how to play the lyre.
+You know how to play the lyre; You know how to compose music;
-You know how to weave endless melodies.
+You know how to make the world dance to Your tune and Your beat.
-You know how to make the world dance
+You know how to love everyone in weal and in woe.
-In Your melodies and rhythms.
-You know how to love the world
-In all its pains and pleasures.
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