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-A cascade of light has come down,
+A cascade of light has come down;
-Do say, on whose account?
+Do say on whose account.
-Golden colored was that source of beauty;
+The golden-colored stream of beauty,
-It made distant everything gloomy.
+It made distant all that is gloomy.
 Painted in new hues were all creepers and trees;