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 Nimeśe kat́ákśe náshe
 Nimeśe megh sare jáy
-Álo ot́he bhásiyá
+Álo ot́he hásiyá
 Járá sabái dúre tháko
 Dúrer báṋdhan rekho náko
 Eso go káche eso
-Khushiir srote hásiyá
+Khushiir srote bhásiyá
 </poem>
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 নিমেষে কটাক্ষে নাশে
 নিমেষে মেঘ সরে যায়
-আলো ওঠে ভাসিয়া
+আলো ওঠে হাসিয়া
 যারা সবাই দূরে থাকো
 দূরের বাঁধন রেখো নাকো
 এসো গো কাছে এসো
-খুশীর স্রোতে হাসিয়া
+খুশীর স্রোতে ভাসিয়া
 </poem>
 | <poem>
-The messenger of light arrives
+The Radiant Wayfarer has come,
-dispelling the dark;
+Dispelling the gloom.
-lethargic bonds are shattered
+He's shattered prison walls,
-and prison walls succumb.
+Removing lethargy.
-The inertness of a hundred eons
+Inertia of a hundred eons,
-has vanished.
+He abolished in a trice.
+At once, clouds disappear;
+Light emerges, shining bright.
-Clouds disappear
+All of You who keep afar,
-and light, forthwith,
+Discard the bond of distance.
-spreads everywhere.
+Do come, oh, do come near;
+Riding the stream of merriment.
-Those of you who are far
-come nearer to him;
-remove the bondage of distance.
-Come nearer still;
-come, in a mirthful current of joy.
 </poem>
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