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 In an instant brilliant, You arrived dressed like a king;
-Then You left for some distant place, leaving me hankering.
+You then went to a far place, leaving me hankering.
-Once again in my time of need, with love swathing me,
+Once again at time of need, with love swathing me,
-You have sent my pain afar, wiped away my tears.
+You have sent pain away, tears You've wiped off.
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