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-I never thought You'd come on a winter night,
+I never thought you'd come on a winter night,
 On a rainy winter night.
 You came very close,
-Though I never asked You to come so close.
+Though I did not tell you to come so close.
 Outside the wind was biting;
 So all my doors were bolted.
-Cracking the bolt, I did not ask You in—
+Cracking the bolt, I did not ask you in—
 To come inside my house.
-Your eyes stared at my face.
+Your eyes were lifted toward my face,
-Who knows why You gazed at me.
+But who knows what you wanted.
-I did not know that Your feelings were wounded.
+I did not notice that you were offended;
-Not even once did I ask You to speak,
+Not once did I invite you to speak.
-On this rainy, wintry night.
 You went far away on Your lonely path,
 Heedless of the biting cold outside,