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-I send forth my call to all who would hear.
+I send out a clarion call.
-I seek those who wish to proceed
-Along the path of humanity.
-Humanity has suffered the anguish
+Those who want to move along the path of light—
-Of affliction and disease,
+I want to get acquainted with them.
-In pain and unbearable agony,
-Felt the harsh curse of hardship and want.
+Humanity has endured many ailments, sorrows, and afflictions.
-I search for those who want to wipe away
+Humanity has endured much mourning and bereavement.
-Those tears of sorrow.
+Those who want to wipe away humanity's tears—
+I want to know them.
 Humanity has endured the pangs of starvation,
-Borne humiliation and cruel indifference.
+Tolerated insults and neglect.
-I welcome those who want to apply the healing balm
+Those who want to salve humanity's wounds—
-On those torturous wounds.
+I want to acknowledge them.
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