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-Why don't You appear by daylight;
+Why did You not come by daylight;
-You've come only in the dark of night.
+You've come only at dark of night.
 On days of joy, no sighting You bestow;
 But on my nights of sorrow, You did dote.
-When stars shine bright in the sky,
+When stars shone bright in the sky,
-And all around fortune abounds,
+And fortune thrived on every side,
-Then I get no glimpse of Thee;
+Then I got no glimpse of Thee;
-After all's been lost, that's when You've eased my grief.
+After all was lost, then You've eased my grief.
 When [[:wikipedia:Chaitra|Chaitra's]]{{#tag:ref|''Madhumás'' (মধুমাস) is another name for Chaitra, which is the first month of the Hindu calendar and the last month of the Bengali calendar. It is associated with the end of winter and the coming of spring. Also associated with the month of Chaitra is a semi-classical music form,  ''Caeti'' (চৈতি) or [[:wikipedia:Chaiti|Chaiti]], literally meaning "of Chaitra". The melodies of Chaiti are derived in part from folk songs. The theme of Chaiti is generally romantic love.|group="nb"}} vernal breeze blows in,
-And, with goosebumps, thrills begin,
+With goosebumps, thrills are awakened.
-Then I do not find You near;
+Then, I did not find You near;
-Along with high heat, that's when You've brought relief.
+But along with heat extreme, You have brought relief.
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