Je phul phuteche mor maner gabhiire: Difference between revisions

Je phul phuteche mor maner gabhiire (view source)

24 bytes added , 12 August 2016

m

Refinements

85,305

edits

@@ Line 66: / Line 66: @@
 </poem>
 | <poem>
-The flower that's bloomed in my mind so deep,
+The flower that has bloomed in my mind so deep,
 Let it reside on the lotus of Your feet.
-The bliss-giving flame all around Thee,
+The bliss-giving flame that's all around Thee,
-For it only are many smiles and tears;
+Only due to it are so many smiles and tears;
-That love of Yours, it's emancipating.
+This love of Yours, it is emancipating.
 According to history, with a noose that's serpentine,
 Light on earth is extinguished by tyranny.
-When it takes place, then comes the Supreme Being,
+When that takes place, then comes the Supreme Being,
 Awakening hope in those who cannot say a thing.
-To agitate in paradise, You have appeared;
+To agitate in paradise, again You have appeared;
 Around Yourself, the scent of ambrosia You keep.
 You don't neglect anyone, whomever they may be;