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-My entire mind remains ever alert,
+My mental casket is ever bestirred;
-Watching the path on which You come, my Lord.
+Watching Your arrival path, oh my Lord and Master.
+Please come with song and dance, close and still closer;
+Never do I bolt heart's door.
-Come closer and closer in song and dance;
+Come mid incense, lights, and flower's sweet pollen,
-The door of my heart is never closed.
+Mid the gentle dew, drenched with love and devotion.
+Free from wind, a lamp-flame is always lit
+For purpose of Your ''árati''{{#tag:ref|Ritualistic greeting of a deity involving the waving of a lighted lamp, incense stick, or censer.|group="nb"}}, Ruler of the Universe.
-Come, Lord, amid incense, candlelight, and sweet flower pollen—
+Any high wind You may bring or dread firebolt rain down,
-On gentle dew, drenched with love and devotion.
+In spite of that, my lamp won't be able to get doused.
-The steady flame of my lamp is constantly alight
-To offer ''árati''{{#tag:ref|Ritualistic greeting of a deity involving the waving of a lighted lamp, incense stick, or censer.|group="nb"}} before You, God.
-Let storms blow in and thunderbolts rain down—
-My lamp can never be extinguished.
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