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 In my home, heart to console,
 My lover did appear.
-He came but did not remain.
+He came but did not stay.
-Morning and evening
+Every day at dawn, going to the pond,
-on my way to the pond
+I keep eyes peeled only for him,
-I always look for him.
+The one who made me his own.
-He has made me his own.
+While at work in house and field,
+I think of him and him alone,
-In all my duties,
+The one who took my everything.
-in the house,
+Now I'll sit and meditate;
-on the farm,
+I'll keep him in my life,
-I think of him
+Although he did not stay.
-and him alone.
-He has taken my everything.
-Now i will sit
-to meditate
-to bring him within my life,
-whether he graces me to stay or no.
 Now i will tell him