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 Gán geyecho giitimay
 Jugántarer timir cire
-Eso{{#tag:ref|In the audio file, we hear the word ''Ele'' at this point. That is also repeated in at least one Roman script source. However, in the [[#Musical notations|original Sargam]] as well as the latest Bengali edition,<ref name="PRS Vol4" /> we find ''Eso''. This word is critical, because it determines the entire spirit of the song. Looking deeper, the word ''Ele'' is not justified, as it seems to have been used as a consequence of a typo (''Ese'' instead of ''Eso'' in the musical instructions given below the lyrics in the Sargam edition). Hence the error seems to be derived from the singer's wrong assumption. Here, ''Eso'' is retained.|group="nb"}} tumi chandamay
+Ele{{#tag:ref|In the audio file, we hear the word ''Ele'' at this point. That is also repeated in at least one Roman script source. However, in the latest Bengali edition,<ref name="PRS Vol4" /> we find ''Eso''. This word is critical, because it determines the entire spirit of the song. Looking deeper, the problem seems to originate with at least one typo and possibly two in the early Sargam edition. Here, we defer to the decision taken by the musical artist.|group="nb"}} tumi chandamay
 Gán bhese jáy alok pathe
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 গান গেয়েছ গীতিময়
 যুগান্তরের তিমির চিরে'
-এসো তুমি ছন্দময়
+এলে তুমি ছন্দময়
 গান ভেসে' যায় পথে
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 == Recordings ==
-Currently, only the following audio rendition is available. However, as the first word of the fourth line of the first verse is repeatedly sung as ''Ele'' instead of ''Eso'' (probably incorrectly), a new version may be required.
 * {{PSmp3alt|https://sarkarverse.org/PS/1000-1999-f/1657%20MARMA%20BHARE%20HRIDAY%20PURE.mp3|singer=Krsna Didi|weblink=[[Sarkarverse]]}}