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-In the crimson splendor of the new dawn,
+In this crimson splendor on a fresh morning,
-With the rhythm of forms You entered my mind.
+With form's rhythm, You entered my psyche.
-You know how to make us laugh; You know how to make us cry;
+You know how to make me laugh, You know how to make me weep;
-You know how to play the game of hide-and-seek.
+You know how to play diverting games of hide-and-seek.
-Today You came with lustrous beauty to fill my life.
+Today You came to fill my life with Your lustrous beauty.
-You know how to play the lyre; You know how to compose music;
+You know how to play the lute, You how to compose melodies;
-You know how to make the world dance to Your tune and Your beat.
+You know how to make the world dance to Your tune and beat.
-You know how to love everyone in weal and in woe.
+You know how to love us all in happiness and suffering.
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