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 In the periphery of phenomenon, in Your magic mirror,
-Everything reverberates with the jingling of ankle bells.{{#tag:ref|Presumably, this is a reference to [[Krsna]] (as Vrajagopal), often pictured wearing ankle bells.|group="nb"}}
+Everything reverberates with the jangle of ankle bells.{{#tag:ref|Presumably, this is a reference to [[Krsna]] (as Vrajagopal), often pictured wearing ankle bells.|group="nb"}}
-Show pity, and take me in Thine eyes,
+Show pity, and gather me in Thine eyes,
-Oh Lord, every way the stealer of my mind.{{#tag:ref|Presumably, this is another reference to Krsna (also as Vrajagopal), often referred to as Citacor, meaning "stealer of the mind" or "stealer of the heart". In that same role, Krsna is also sometimes referred to as Makhancor, meaning "butter thief".<ref name="AV8">{{cite book|title=Ananda Vacanamrtam Part 8|author=Shrii Shrii Anandamurti|chapter=The Lord Should Always Be Praised}}</ref>|group="nb"}}
+In every way, my Citacor.{{#tag:ref|Presumably, this is another reference to Krsna (also as Vrajagopal), often referred to as Citacor, meaning "stealer of the mind" or "stealer of the heart". In that same role, Krsna is also sometimes referred to as Makhancor, meaning "butter thief".<ref name="AV8">{{cite book|title=Ananda Vacanamrtam Part 8|author=Shrii Shrii Anandamurti|chapter=The Lord Should Always Be Praised}}</ref>|group="nb"}}
 I do not want anything worldly at your feet.