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 Upala sakala páyete biṋdhibe
 Kusher káṋt́áy jvalite haibe
-Eo{{#tag:ref|This word is given as ''Eta'' (so much) in some Roman-script versions and the latest published Bengali.<ref name="PRS Vol3" /> However, in at least one Roman-script version and in the audio file, we find ''Eo'' (a woman whose husband is still alive). Both words are possible; however, in context, ''Eo'' is more meaningful.|group="nb"}} kii ámáy sahe jete habe
+Eta ki ámáy sahe jete habe
 E vyathá jánái káháre
 </poem>
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 উপল সকল পায়েতে বিঁধিবে
 কুশের কাঁটায় জ্বলিতে হইবে
-এও কী আমায় সহে' যেতে হবে
+এত কি আমায় সহে' যেতে হবে
 এ ব্যথা জানাই কাহারে
 </poem>
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 By every pebble if My feet will be pricked,
 And from prickly grass burrs they will burn...
-Oh wife, what thing by Me won't be endured;
+So much by Me won't it be endured;
-This pain, to whom do I tell it!
+For this pain, to whom do I tell it!
 </poem>
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