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 Like the lotus flower, You have blossomed.
-Many ages had elapsed in mute austerities;
+Many ages had gone by in silent austerities;
-Without the moon nights elapsed in a lengthy series.
+Without the moon, nights elapsed in a lengthy series.
 After long, at dawn You came, careening on love's stream.
 Affection You've conferred, all our hopes fulfilling;