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-He is my very own,
+He is my very own–
-But that I did not know; ere now, I did not know.
+That I did not know; ere now, I did not know.
-He is my melody, practiced arduously;
+He is my melody, which was rehearsed arduously;
 But that I did not think; ere now, I did not think.
-When He was very close–
+When He was very near,
-Dancing in rhythm and song
+Dancing in cadence and song
-With the sweetness of my psyche–
+With the sweetness of my psyche,
-Then I did not heed, ere now I did not heed.
+Then I did not heed; ere now, I did not heed.
-Now that he has gone,
+At present He has gone away, casting me aside,
-I am alone
+Thrusting me into estrangement's fire;
-and in consuming pangs
+But once there was so much love,
-of separation
+So much splendid aspiration.
-I understand
+At last I've understood; ere now, I did not see.
-how deeply
-He had filled me with his love
-with hope, with aspiration.
-I understand these now,
-I did not know before.
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