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 | <poem>
 On a fine sweet morn,
-You came, Thou most revered.
+You had come, Thou most revered…
-With Your honey-coating smiles,
+You, with the honey-coating smile,
-You perfumed the way, Thou without peer.
+Perfuming the way, Thou without peer.
 By Your touch, buds bloom in myriad fashions;
 At Your delight, the garden madly dances.
 On a rain-drenched night,
-You went away, Thou unforgettable.
+You've gone away, Thou unforgettable.
-With Your warm and tender eyes,
+You, with warm and tender eyes,
-You crushed my heart, Thou most beloved.
+Churning my soul, Thou most beloved.
 </poem>
 |}