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 Egiye cali káṋt́á dali
-Varaśádáminiite tamasájáminite{{#tag:ref|In the latest Bangla edition,<ref name="PRS Vol3" /> this line is written differently from what appears in the Roman-script verions; and the last verse is omitted entirely. It seems that the audio rendition follows an earlier Bangla version or the Roman-script versions. For this line we have retained something from both the latest Bangla edition and the Roman-script versions. That seems more meaningful in context.|group="nb"}}
+Varaśádáminiite tamasá jái maniite{{#tag:ref|In the latest Bangla edition,<ref name="PRS Vol3" /> this line is written differently from what appears in the Roman-script verions and how the song is sung in the audio recording. The latest Bangla is preferred, because it corresponds better with the last line of this verse.|group="nb"}}
 Patha hate kabhu námi ni
 Ámi tava bhávanár madhu kali
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 এগিয়ে চলি কাঁটা দলি’
-বরষাদামিনীতে তমসাযামিনীতে
+বরষাদামিনীতে তমসা যাই মনীতে
 পথ হতে কভু নামি নি
 আমি তব ভাবনার মধু কলি